So I had another scan, I'm struggling to read it still, but a style I note you use is to quote other people, rather than expressing your views.

I know a lot of people like to debate arguments between third parties, many others like to quote celebrities or influencers. It is very common, but IMHO, there is a better way.

I have a bias, I prefer to discuss the opinions of the people I'm talking to, not the views of the people they have read about.

This isn't a criticism per say, but an observation. I prefer to be self sovereign in the realm of knowledge as well as money. I don't trust any third party, I always do my own thinking.