joyboy : Update README.md (#207)

Under Origin Story, i made the changes below

1. I changed "the character" to "a character" to align with the indefinite article usage

2. I added a period after "One piece" in the first sentence to correct the punctuation

3. I changed "are" to "is" in "the treasure are the friends" to ensure subject-verb agreement

4. I added a comma after "WalletCOnnect" to separate the clause

5. I changed "setup" to "set up" to use the correct verb form

6. I added "an" before "ordinary Starknet wallet" for grammatical correctness

7. I added a comma after Argent or Braavos to separate the two alternatives

8. I added "the" before "so-called SocialPay" for grammatical correctness

9. I capitalized BIP340 to standardize the abbreviation

10. I removed "one" after "Nostr native" to avoid redundancy

11. I changed "Bravvos" to "Braavos" because Bravvos is misleading as that isn's the correct spelling of the Braavos wallet.

Under Tips, i made the changes below

12. I added a colon after "React Native" to introduce what follows

13. I changed "on the first days" to "in the first days" for grammatical correctness

14. I added "are" before "welcome" for grammatical correctness

https://github.com/keep-starknet-strange/joyboy/commit/a664397fae91870b7f971f3dcbf9d2892f4cfa74

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