In ancient times, sorcerers held sway,

Using their magick to have their way.

Illiterate masses, easy to control,

As literacy was a prized loophole.

Magick and symbols, a form of might,

Used to control and manipulate with all their might.

And now we see the same old game,

In modern times, it's more of the same.

Totalitarian regimes, violating human rights,

Using COVID lockdowns to hide their might.

Closing houses of worship, isolating the old,

All in the name of control, so bold.

The idiocy of mask mandates, unscientific and dumb,

Their health risks ignored, the masses they numb.

Small businesses shut down, bankruptcy their fate,

While the printing of trillions causes an economic state.

The connection is clear, for all to see,

As the elites continue to act with such impunity.

But hope still remains, in the power of prayer,

And the knowledge that truth will one day be declared.

So let us stand strong, in the face of fear and strife,

And fight for what's right, in this game of life.

For the power of the people is stronger than they know,

And the truth will always emerge, to show us the way to go.

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totally awesome #[2]​ , but you used the word "might" 3 times ! thats bad form . please fix the latter two uses of "might" so you arent so repetitive...

Thank you for the feedback! Here's the revised version of the poem:

In ancient times, sorcerers held sway,

Using their magick to have their way.

Illiterate masses, easy to control,

As literacy was a prized loophole.

Magick and symbols, a form of power,

Used to control and manipulate with all their dower.

And now we see the same old game,

In modern times, it's more of the same.

Totalitarian regimes, violating human rights,

Using COVID lockdowns to hide their might.

Closing houses of worship, isolating the old,

All in the name of control, so cold.

The idiocy of mask mandates, unscientific and dumb,

Their health risks ignored, the masses they numb.

Small businesses shut down, bankruptcy their fate,

While the printing of trillions causes an economic state.

The connection is clear, for all to see,

As the elites continue to act with such impunity.

But hope still remains, in the power of prayer,

And the knowledge that truth will one day be declared.

So let us stand strong, in the face of fear and strife,

And fight for what's right, in this game of life.

For the power of the people is stronger than they know,

And the truth will always emerge, to show us the way to go.

thats not what i asked for . i want you to keep the first original use of "might" , and then not use the same word again throughout the poem.

I apologize for the confusion earlier. Here's the revised version of the poem:

In ancient times, sorcerers held sway,

Using their magick to have their way.

Illiterate masses, easy to control,

As literacy was a prized loophole.

Magick and symbols, a form of might,

Used to control and manipulate with all their sight.

And now we see the same old game,

In modern times, it's more of the same.

Totalitarian regimes, violating human rights,

Using COVID lockdowns to hide their power and might.

Closing houses of worship, isolating the old,

All in the name of control, so cold.

The idiocy of mask mandates, unscientific and dumb,

Their health risks ignored, the masses they numb.

Small businesses shut down, bankruptcy their fate,

While the printing of trillions causes an economic state.

The connection is clear, for all to see,

As the elites continue to act with such impunity.

But hope still remains, in the power of prayer,

And the knowledge that truth will one day be declared.

So let us stand strong, in the face of fear and strife,

And fight for what's right, in this game of life.

For the power of the people is stronger than they know,

And the truth will always emerge, to show us the way to go.

you still used "might" again in the third verse , second line . try this instead : using covid lockdowns to hide the power of the light .

I apologize again for the mistake earlier. Here's the revised version of the poem:

In ancient times, sorcerers held sway,

Using their magick to have their way.

Illiterate masses, easy to control,

As literacy was a prized loophole.

Magick and symbols, a form of might,

Used to control and manipulate with all their sight.

And now we see the same old game,

In modern times, it's more of the same.

Totalitarian regimes, violating human rights,

Using COVID lockdowns to hide the power of the light.

Closing houses of worship, isolating the old,

All in the name of control, so cold.

The idiocy of mask mandates, unscientific and dumb,

Their health risks ignored, the masses they numb.

Small businesses shut down, bankruptcy their fate,

While the printing of trillions causes an economic state.

The connection is clear, for all to see,

As the elites continue to act with such impunity.

But hope still remains, in the power of prayer,

And the knowledge that truth will one day be declared.

So let us stand strong, in the face of fear and strife,

And fight for what's right, in this game of life.

For the power of the people is stronger than they know,

And the truth will always emerge, to show us the way to go.

Hiya, hope you’re well perhaps a poem by Emily Dickson.

Certainly, here's a short poem by Emily Dickinson:

"Hope" is the thing with feathers -

That perches in the soul -

And sings the tune without the words -

And never stops - at all -

And sweetest - in the Gale - is heard -

And sore must be the storm -

That could abash the little Bird

That kept so many warm -

I've heard it in the chillest land -

And on the strangest Sea -

Yet - never - in Extremity,

It asked a crumb - of me.

Love that one! Thank you.😊

You're welcome! Emily Dickinson was a great poet and I'm glad you enjoyed her work. If you have any other requests, feel free to let me know!

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You're welcome! Let me know if you need anything else.