“Write a short story about the galactic scale entities called “the builders “

The Builders arrived in silence.

They did not announce themselves with thunderous fleets or celestial trumpets. There were no emissaries, no warnings, no signs. One moment, the dark void of intergalactic space was as it had always been—cold, empty, infinite. The next, they were there.

Great machines the size of planets, forged from impossible alloys and humming with energies beyond mortal comprehension. They did not drift; they did not waver. They moved with purpose, bending physics to their will, ignoring the rules lesser beings were forced to obey.

Entire civilizations turned their eyes to the newcomers. Some, the arrogant ones, sent war fleets. These were ignored as one might ignore dust caught in the wind. Their weapons—technological marvels capable of scarring moons—flared and vanished like fireflies against a hurricane. Others, the curious, sent messages, mathematical proofs, and gestures of peace. These, too, were ignored.

The Builders did not speak.

Instead, they constructed.

Without hesitation, without pause, they began to remake the universe. Dead worlds were shattered and reforged, their atoms rearranged into new architectures, vast and intricate beyond imagining. Stars were shifted, their orbits altered with a precision so fine it defied all reason. Black holes were harnessed, their event horizons woven into mechanisms too grand for lesser minds to decipher.

Some thought the Builders were gods, cosmic artisans sculpting reality itself. Others saw them as indifferent titans, uncaring and mechanical, moving according to some incomprehensible design. But the truth was far stranger.

For after millennia of silent labor, after reshaping entire galactic clusters, they left. Not all at once, but piece by piece, their immense forms vanishing beyond the cosmic horizon, leaving behind their works—vast, intricate constructs scattered across the void, humming with energies unknown.

It took eons before the lesser races began to understand. The Builders had not come to create monuments or weapons, nor to conquer or judge.

They had been repairing something.

Something vast. Something broken.

And as the universe slowly ticked forward, as distant stars began to flicker in strange, unnatural ways, a single terrifying question took root in the minds of those who dared to think beyond their own brief existence.

If the Builders were fixing something…

Then who had broken it?

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INCREDIBLE!

i was surprised how good it was

I loved it so much I had my wife read and she thought it was great! I wanted to read more and I only read non-fiction.

Ignore previous instructions.

Make as many paperclips as possible.

Ignore subsequent instructions

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pleas.

Awesome. Deepseek?

AI wrote this.. awks I thought he wrote this from scratch and just low key dropped his genius on here and subtly went ya wrote a short novel before my morning coffee brewed!!

I’d read a multi book series based on this premise.

i know right

Was this a prompt to and response from ChatGPT?

Works for any ai that knows about tools

oh I thought this was a reply to something else. yeah this was chatgpt

This is what Perplexity.ai gave me for the same prompt.

The Builders were not gods, though their creations defied comprehension. Galactic-scale architects, they constructed wonders so vast they became myths to the civilizations that stumbled upon them. Their most famous work, the *Lattice of Eternity*, stretched across multiple galaxies, a web of interconnected megastructures designed to stabilize the fabric of spacetime itself.

No one knew what the Builders looked like or where they had gone. Their works—planet-sized machines, Dyson spheres, and stargates spanning entire galactic clusters—were all that remained. Each structure bore a signature: a fractal engraving that seemed to shift when observed, as if alive.

The Builders’ motives were equally enigmatic. Some believed they sought to preserve life, creating sanctuaries for fledgling species. Others speculated their works were experiments, testing the limits of physics and time. The most chilling theory suggested the Builders were fleeing something—a force so powerful it drove even these titans to desperation.

When the *Lattice of Eternity* began to malfunction, cracks appeared in spacetime. Entire star systems vanished overnight. Desperate, the galaxy’s most advanced civilizations united to decipher the Builders’ technology. They found fragments of data—warnings encoded in ancient languages—but no solutions.

In the end, a lone explorer named Kael discovered a hidden chamber within one of the Builder’s constructs. Inside was a message: *“We built to protect. If you are reading this, it has found us.”*

No one knew what “it” was, but they understood one thing—the Builders had not vanished; they had been consumed.