I'm working on a presentation called 'Why Bitcoin?" for Non Bitcoiners and I have a draft I'd be happy to have critiqued with respect to the logic I'm using in it.

Would anyone like to provide some constructive criticism? Its very much a draft but the general jist of what I want to say is there.

It's not aimed at Bitcoiners but instead people who haven't yet bought BTC and perhaps don't understand the investment reason why to get some. It's below if you'd like to help. I will share the presentation after I get some critique as well in case its useful to orange pill.

I think towards the end I feel like I get a little unsure of what I'm saying and not sure its good or not. Like the part where I compare vs other investments.

NB: I'm taking the stance and framework of ROI and investment because non Bitcoiners think this way and not the sovereignty angle just yet. Although I think that's valid and great I am trying to Orange Pill in baby steps and feel like that will lose a beginner audience so I'm not framing it like that although its certainly part of the appeal of Bitcoin.

Here we go.....