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“Oliver Twist – Chapter 14 Flow”

(Original rap inspired by the events of the chapter)

[Verse 1]

Yo, Oliver’s healing, outta that pain,

In Brownlow’s crib, feelin’ human again.

Kindness hits harder than a London rain,

From the streets to the warmth, it’s a whole new lane.

But deep in the shadows, Fagin’s on the creep,

Can’t let the boy go, got secrets to keep.

Bill Sikes lurkin’, Nancy’s eyes weep,

They plannin’ a snatch while the city don’t sleep.

[Chorus]

From the cold stone floor to a feather bed,

From hunger pains to a plate of bread,

London’s got angels, London’s got snakes,

Trust is a gamble that a poor boy takes.

[Verse 2]

Brownlow’s kindness, it ain’t no act,

But the past got claws, and it’s pullin’ him back.

Fagin spins tales in a smoke-filled shack,

Wants Oliver returnin’ to the criminal track.

Nancy’s torn, got a heart that’s real,

But the life she’s in got a chain of steel.

Oliver’s dreamin’ of a world to feel

Safe and clean—like a brand-new deal.

[Bridge]

Two worlds, one boy, one fragile choice,

One side’s kindness, the other’s that voice

Sayin’ “Stick with the crew, it’s the only way,”

But Oliver’s hopin’ for a brighter day.

[Chorus]

From the cold stone floor to a feather bed,

From hunger pains to a plate of bread,

London’s got angels, London’s got snakes,

Trust is a gamble that a poor boy takes.

[Outro]

So here’s where we stand, tension’s tight,

Storm clouds gather in the dead of night.

Oliver’s future’s hangin’ in sight,

Will it be the dark… or the guiding light?

Thank you. The world needed to be graced with that artistic wonder.

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