#WritersCoffeeClub Is there any work of fiction you could have written better?

About 7 out of 10 audio books we listen to while traveling. I'm afflicted with the need to edit them in my head as we listen. Line edits. Plot signaling. Character development. Word repetition within 8 words of each other. Would I ever tell you which books they were? No. This is a private affliction where I'm just fixing something that gets on my nerves.