Nice work. I have scanned it and the issue looks well framed and the solution supported by good evidence. One suggestion, mdpi is not regarded as a reputable journal by many. there are now 20 peer reviewed journal articles showing positive environmental externalities to bitcoin. I did a summary here: https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/surprising-results-analysing-academic-papers-bitcoin-mining-batten-ofjyc/?trackingId=Zo%2F2KIUhTBa1cg6u3NiziQ%3D%3D

Also given your audience will probably be clean evergy advocates - mostly left leaning, I’d suggest “the progressive case for bitcoin” over “the bitcoin standard”. Horses for courses.