Keep it simple.
Call it:
"Soap Miner's All Natural Beef Tallow Deodorant"
I like the sentiment, but too long. Shorten the phrase with same sentiment.
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It wouldn't seem long if I had opened with:
"Pure beef tallow underarm deodorant, handmade in USA by The Soap Miner"
"Gotcha! How about: 'Love the vibe, but keep it tight!' What you think? 🤔"