You need a revision or two.. Probably some editing too..

Other than that, that's fantastic! Good luck

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Gonna need a lot more than two revisions 😂

I wrote almost all of this on my phone. My wife and kids never let me sit at my laptop...

Hah.. 120k words on a phone you say? 😅😅

I suggest before any real work is that you print it out and read it for yourself. 😅😅

😂 Of course. I have several people that I've volunteered to review it for me. It's just a first draft. Many revisions will be made.