The pic shows how it looks here.

It could be that your other client's relays have not picked it up. Copy the noteid from one client and paste it into the Iris search box on the other and see whether it comes up.

If you're sure that it is published you could try to "Resend to relays" from the note menu.

It could also be that you're not logged in with your private key, you're offline or not connected to the relays. A quick way to see whether you're logged in with your nsec is to see whether the DMs are opening up.