Corydon

Find below (both in original and personal translation) a Romanian poem originally titled "Corydon"i by a somewhat obscure Romanian author (one Radu Stanca). I made the English version rather Scottish deliberately and, in my view, quite deservedly.

Sunt cel mai frumos din orasul acesta,

Pe strazile pline cand ies n-am pereche,

Atat de gratios port inelu-n ureche

Si-atat de-nflorite cravata si vesta.

Sunt cel mai frumos din orasul acesta.

Nascut din incestul luminii cu-amurgul,

Privirile mele dezmiarda genunea,

De mine vorbeste-n oras toata lumea,

De mine se teme in taina tot burgul.

Sunt Printul penumbrelor, eu sunt amurgul...

Nu-i chip sa ma scap de priviri patimase,

Prin parul meu vanat, subtiri trec ca ata,

Si toti ma intreaba: sunt moartea, sunt viata ?

De ce-am ciorapi verzi, pentru ce fes de pase ?

Si nu-i chip sa scap nici pe strazi marginase...

Panglici, cordelute, nimicuri m-acopar,

Cand calc, parca trec pe pamant de pe-un soclu.

Un ochi (pe cel roz) il ascund sub monoclu

Si-ntregul picior cand pasesc il descopar,

Dar iute-l acopar, ca iar sa-l descopar...

Celalalt ochi (cel galben) il las sa s-amuze

Privind cum se tin toti ca scaiul de mine.

Ha ! Ha ! Dac-ati sti cat va sade de bine

Sarind, topaind dupa negrele-mi buze.

Cellalt ochi s-amuza si-l las sa s-amuze

C-un tainic creion imi sporesc frumusetea,

Fac baie in cidru de trei ori pe noapte

Si-n loc de scuipat am ceva ca un lapte,

Pantofi cu bareta-mi ajuta zveltetea

Si-un drog scos din sange de scroafa, nobletea.

Toti dintii din gura pudrati mi-s cu aur,

Mijlocul mi-e supt in coreset sub camase,

Fumez numai pipe de opiu uriase,

Pe bratul meu drept tatuat-am un taur

Si fruntea mi-e-ncinsa cu frunze de laur.

Prin lungile, tainice, unghii vopsite,

Umbrela cu cap de pisica ranjeste

Si nu stiu de ce, cand plimbarea-mi prieste,

Cand sunt multumit c-am starnit noi ispite,

Din mine ies limbi si naparci otravite.

Din mine cresc crengi ca pe pomi, matasoase,

Si insasi natura atotstiutoare

Ea insasi nu stie ce sunt: om sau floare ?

Sau numai un turn ratacit printre case,

Un turn de pe care cad pietre pretioase ?

Sunt cel mai frumos din orasul acesta,

Pe strazile pline cand ies n-am pereche,

Atat de gratios port inelu-n ureche

Si-atat de-nflorite cravata si vesta.

Sunt cel mai frumos din orasul acesta.

And now in English :

I am the most beautiful one in this town,

My equal's not seen in the populous street

So graceful, the ring in my nose, and so neat

So flowery sweet and azure, both breches 'an gown

I am the most beautiful one in this town!

Born as I were, of light's light incest at dusk

My gaze carresses carelessly th'abyss

While every soul, dreaming the bliss of my kiss

Behind leaves its body, forgotten old husk

I am the Prince of penumbra, the essence of musk

There's no way to miss the countless eyes inflamed

Through my purple hair they pass, thinner than ice

And as they wonder they look twice, then thrice.

Why the green socks, and why my hat's thusly maimed

On sidest street still I am met with multitudes untamed.

From under a bundle all cockades a' ribbons

My foot falls on earth as if coming off marbleii

One eye (that is pink) hidden by lenses that garble

My step shews the elegant gait of the gibbons

While well aired hips help the spreading of sibbens

T'other eye (that is jaundy) I permit to amuse

It's a sight, to see a whole world, like a thistle

Ensared on my wool. World of dogs chasing a whistle

Jumping an' jaunting an' fighting to figure who's whose

The eye that amuses I permit to amuse.

Mysterious crayons so contour my beauty

Three times every night I stop-bathe it in cider

My spit is akin to the juice of a spider

The shoes I wear are most complicated, and fruity,

While my morgue is well drawn in pale tinctures of duty.

All teeth I still carry are dusted in sable

My viscerae caught in a strangulation most august

I smoke only pipe, full of opium, humongous

Each part of my body is described on a label

Upon high brow lies a neat bunch of net cable

Through lengthy, mysteriously hued thicket of nails

Th'umbrella with grinning cat's head can be spied

And who knows why, when my walk swells my bosom with pride

With the enjoyment of inventing new passions, new scales

Out spurt of me slithering serpent, and railroad rails.

Of me grow tree branches consistent with silk,

And very nature, herself omniscient

Yet can't quite say if deficient's sufficient

Or merely something of towery ilk,

A wound seeping forth amethists, garnets and milk.

I am the most beautiful one in this town,

My equal's not seen in the populous street

So graceful, the ring in my nose, and so neat

So flowery sweet and azure, both breches 'an gown

I am the most beautiful one in this town!

Ta-da!

———Somewhat ineptly, considering the name's a placeholder for Greek bucolic works, whereas the subject, context and style most definitely urban in such a way as to preclude the relation. [↩]I defy you, find much more poetry rhyming marble, and ribbons. Shit language is shit language, wut. [↩]

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