You're a most patient reader and charitable person. The man had the greatest ideas and creativity, but he wrote horribly.
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I actually totally agree his style is awkward and odd at times. I was a lot younger so maybe that helped but his ideas are so “out there”. His character struggles with mental health and addiction also struck home with me.
A Scanner Darkly, Confessions of a Crap Artist and (my marginal favourite) Puttering About in a Small Land.
Most of his novellas are a quick read.