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remember you

like i remember me

as a child

flowing. seeing

reborn again

in fresh warming water

back to the sun

and son's only daughter

remember me

like i remember you

let us play again

just as two

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Semblances of Past Memories

I like that word semblances. What does this title mean to you?

That what we do with family reminder us of past memories that led to our bond being stronger.

What we do together with family resonates since it gives us flashbacks of times in the past spent together

I like that.

Family is so unique. Unbreakable bonds. And sharing the oldest memories is quite powerful.

Memory of Us

I like that.

Definitely could be a fitting title. And I like that it doesn't repeat anything from the poem. The them is about us all being one. So I like memory of us. Sounds like remembering we are all one love, in this context.

“One Love”

Great title.. some might say it is spoken for, even in a spiritual sense. RIP #bobmarley 🙏

Remembering Us, Remembering Me

I really like the second one. It gives me a nice visual.

I love visuals. And reborn in sunlit waters, fits the feeling I was writing from.

Witnessing

Ewww. I like that one. Will tell me why you picked it?

I think that this poem offers a lot of witnessing of and between the relations. That to witness in this way creates the connectivity that I see the poem expressing.

love the poem, David!

Thank you. I'm planing to be sharing a lot more on here.

you should. your words will inspire others and impact this community in a positive way. Happy New Year’s!

Blood

I am guessing you are referring to blood like family?