Replying to Avatar Ava

"Alias’ Justification to Go Ahead is excellent and probably my favorite section. The Spanish bar scenes are familiar and make me nostalgic for La Libraria, the Claddagh and the rest in #Marbella."

Another kind reaction from one of Pegged's beta readers.

If interested, let me know and I will be very happy to send you a draft of act 1.

#betareading #proofreading #editing #writing #reading #thriller #peggedsaga
Avatar
ZAPLOTTO 2mo ago 💬 1

I liked the subtlety of that scene as well.

Reply to this note

Please Login to reply.

Discussion

Avatar
Ava 2mo ago

It's a difficult one and still needs some revision. I like it as well. It reveals Alias' non-managerial approach to decision making. #dwar, my friend.