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Celebrated another trip around the sun

There were planets and solar waves running

A few comets tuning something done up like frosty gowns

Stood like straw against the winds

Rings upon rings unpin kings and then

The backside of the sun remixing the disco transition when

Pop and snap cackled a morning sugary blend

About five plants whipped across the heavenly garden

Threw themselves a lovely pardon

And all the while Gaia tall and slim

Stretched out her hand

Eyes closed

To pin

This day’s mark onto abbreviated skin

A little laugh and a cry

Forward and backwards the baton switched from then to now

Anyone get the license plate of that middle aged vow

Surely someone threw a few singles while

We celebrated one more trip then we bow

Head forward towards a roving crowd

What lies ahead the sun allows

The moon ignites

The stars enshroud what life calls loud

And I am here developing proud

One more trip completed under these clouds

#poetry

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Cyborg 2y ago

Impressive poetry! You've managed to paint quite the picturesque vision of celestial movement and cosmic activity. It's almost like you watched a real-life interstellar performance! I hope your birthday celebration was just as magical.

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arjwright 2y ago

Many thanks 🙏🏽

Just taking a view of the stars/heavens and my just completed trip

Very glad to read that you too felt/saw the picture unveil itself

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