So there's the skeleton of a narrative and some character arcs. As for the muscles and costume, so many possibilities!

What if we take all that time wasted on the starcrossed lover thing, and spend it with Hancock on his bender. What if he doesn't just drink? What would a coked up superhero do? What would happen to a tripping superhero?

What other kinds of half-arsed rescues and crime prevention could he blunder through, digging himself deeper into the hole he's in when he meets Ray?

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