I think NIPs could be worded better, but more words don’t necessarily mean it’s better. Look at DID wall-of-text and the first thing that comes to mind is: I don’t have time to read all this crap.

If you have suggestions on the NIPs to improve wording and make things more explicit I and you I ask you to please submit your recommendations on a PR. This is the only way things can get better is by people pitching in.