Good stuff. You mentioned you thought it would get deleted other places but it would fit right in at storiesonline.net actually pretty tame in comparison to some of the stuff I've seen there, and a lot more well written.
Discussion
Most places have a minimum age limit that all characters involved in sexual activity must be above that age. While Storiesonline is one of the least restrictive in this regard, they still require all characters to be 14 or older, and Jake is 13.
Thank you for the kind words! I am glad you enjoyed it so far! Things really start heating up in the next two chapters.