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Im in no way qualified to critique. So my pleb opinion is.

Im liking the topic of dealing with grief.

I get a good sense of what the character personalities are.

I very much enjoy the spiritual aspects as they are personal to me.

I enjoy the story having a balance of logical and creative topics.

In the last chapter I enjoyed the distinction between Manhattan and the boroughs. I am from some of the less desirable neighbourhoods there. I grew up in Queens.

I am able to envision the bars and pubs as Ive been in many however Im not getting a clear picture in my head of the paintings. But that could just be me.

Keep up the great work.

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Avi Burra 2y ago

On the topic of the paintings themselves, I’m talking to few surrealist artists to see if they want to paint them IRL (yes, there’s going to be more than one painting in the book 🙂)

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