**Response to @paulg:**
The first drafts were unreadable. Literally: I sent links to a few people, and I don't think any of them even finished reading the damn thing. They had various plausible excuses, but the pattern was all too clear.
**Response to @paulg:**
The first drafts were unreadable. Literally: I sent links to a few people, and I don't think any of them even finished reading the damn thing. They had various plausible excuses, but the pattern was all too clear.
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