I think that is my struggle in a nutshell, I tend to either be verbose or dense.

I believe training is implicit in anything we attempt seriously. I'm not a published writer (simce my high school newspaper), and writing isn't explicitly part of my current fiat job responsibilities (outside of writing professional emails and other customer and internal communication).

So if I am to pursue technical writing as my value add, I will need to train and improve. That is all. Right now, reading advice articles on writing good PRs.