I might have some suggestions on the typography but I’d need to see it in PDF form.
Getting closer to print date. I have lightning working on my nostr:npub155m2k8ml8sqn8w4dhh689vdv0t2twa8dgvkpnzfggxf4wfughjsq2cdcvg storefront now. So go ahead and get your order in and pay if you’re interested. Cutoff is Wednesday night and I will place orders only if payment has been received. If you placed an order before Lightning was working, I will send you an invoice to pay from.

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I can send it to you. What’s the best way? Do you use SimpleX?