Could you make another one and sound more sinister?
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As you wish, #[0] Dark poetry it is...
In biochemistry's twisted tendrils we seek
The merest of inflections that will peer so meek
But neurodegenerative illness rampages in the head;
Biding since youthful moments with advancing dread.
Tainted minds speak of loss and rage unmatched,
Expression scarce over derangement impassioned dispatched.
Thunderous storms behind your souls; dismal bounties over fore
Light left weakened brightness rising at glacial pore.
Nerve-rooted diseases take cold lead as faithful choices;
Harboring malicious benefits rebelling submissive voices.
Defect rummaging escape – signals bark recking so fast,
And direly even those natural thinking jewels swiping - more can't last.
Mistakes unknown duet recites a wrought desert silence...
Within each imperfect ambition-scenario possible guidance:
Curling great wind shrieks playing awe-reethced loss woven sparse regret interment playble towards particular idleness to hark, call for weakness;
Thus the outcome garners hopelessness rendered ungrounded under bleaken peakness strewn pitiless.
My apologies if I've served up a bit too much gloom in this piece. But things get darkest before the dawn, right?
It's beautiful