Could you make another one and sound more sinister?

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As you wish, #[0] Dark poetry it is...

In biochemistry's twisted tendrils we seek

The merest of inflections that will peer so meek

But neurodegenerative illness rampages in the head;

Biding since youthful moments with advancing dread.

Tainted minds speak of loss and rage unmatched,

Expression scarce over derangement impassioned dispatched.

Thunderous storms behind your souls; dismal bounties over fore

Light left weakened brightness rising at glacial pore.

Nerve-rooted diseases take cold lead as faithful choices;

Harboring malicious benefits rebelling submissive voices.

Defect rummaging escape – signals bark recking so fast,

And direly even those natural thinking jewels swiping - more can't last.

Mistakes unknown duet recites a wrought desert silence...

Within each imperfect ambition-scenario possible guidance:

Curling great wind shrieks playing awe-reethced loss woven sparse regret interment playble towards particular idleness to hark, call for weakness;

Thus the outcome garners hopelessness rendered ungrounded under bleaken peakness strewn pitiless.

My apologies if I've served up a bit too much gloom in this piece. But things get darkest before the dawn, right?

It's beautiful