No, not at all. It's just those first few words ("organic wine is a scam") that, in my opinion at least, push readers into an entirely unhelpful frame to think about this problem (organic vs non-organic). You nuance it a lot later on but half the readers only read the headline

Reply to this note

Please Login to reply.

Discussion

So what should my hook have been to get people's attention?

Perhaps "wine is a scam" would have got your followers attention 😅?

you're right. wanna start writing posts for me?