Learn about “regulatory capture” and then take a look at your “deregulation” statement.

I say “statement” instead of “argument” due to the fact that you have no data or references n this note.

I also recommend that you take a look at what you are trying to achieve with your writing. If you want to rant, you did a good job. If you wanted to write a convincing article to sway people’s opinions, you failed miserably.

I recommend you read the first few pages of Softwar by Jason Lowery. Analyze how he uses historical figures and real world examples to capture the reader’s attention while simultaneously creating an emotional connection to the outcome.