nostr:npub16uchthmwa5xkurj7yjfkh5tn8j8uz94dul9eu4slguaqchlzfzssjwk62q Hmm. It feels like you are burying the lede. Could you re-order it so the crisis/stakes are described before the participants? Or is the relationship more important than the plot?

#WritingWonders Day 11 MC POV: If you had to give your closest friend one piece of advice, what would it be? Why?

Franz-Karl: Giving grownups advice feels... unbalanced. But if I must: don't let my troubles eat your life entirely. Keep a space for yourself. And watch your back.

#writingwonders 5 Does your MC have any pictures of themselves with friends or family?

Franz-Karl is a Prince in a palace where his family has lived for a few generations. There are lots of relatives on the walls, including familiar faces showing up in allegorical or religious scenes in addition to explicit portraits.

Household Shrines display tokens of living and dead family members that are often miniatures, or sometimes sketches.

Not sure a group illo of his immediate family exists.

nostr:npub1wlnsczh9tt87jkq8ealywdzju8xekdvwcn87q944h3mk9x52xzzszwkuvx nostr:npub1k24sy39zjs7pccfcafcfghn0tcl96wht85tf7ygv3tv2cqa7kezqum26zw and another one that is powered by moving water