nostr:npub16uchthmwa5xkurj7yjfkh5tn8j8uz94dul9eu4slguaqchlzfzssjwk62q Quite good overall. But I want a clearer indication of where the two-species aspect comes into play. The worlds about to collide allusion isn’t quite enough.

nostr:npub1gvlm848sp2nfehhdyvtzkgw65l2aqnwghmx5czauwlq4kqmxsrysdh8ag7 Congratulations! And good luck!