I absolutely like your original logo: it has personality and distance itself from the easy design trends, then I find it really memorable. I appreciate the fact that a logo should not necessary explain everything, let the user immagine.
You are right, maybe the lines could be a little, just a little, thicker. And at the same time I would lighten the "coracle" text to equilibrate the two elements.
Keep it!
Thank you! Can you elaborate on what you mean by lightening the text?
Sure, I will elaborate a mockup in the next hours.
Thanks for the zapâš¡ !!
Worth it 🤙
Above the original logo, below the updated one:
In addition to increasing the thickness of the logo lines and decreasing the font weight:
- Lighter/darker orange shades for interior elements
- Some space between characters
Interesting, thanks. Is that still staatliches? Looks so much different. Are there any other fonts you would reccmmend?
I didn't want to change the font to not be too invasive :) Staatliches only has a 400, so I lightened it manually with a custom negative offset; I can tune it or/and look for some alternatives.
In the meantime, would you like me to share this version with you?
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