Wow! Is this from a professional reviewer, i.e. academic teaching creative writing?

Love the bit about emotional intelligence. Only that makes the characters relatable.

If you don’t care about a character (one way or the other) the story sinks.

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Yes I tried to get people from different fields in the first wave of beta readers. This one is an author and an academic on the subject, which was helpful.