Have you ever felt frustrated by the tyranny of time?πŸ€” Do you have enough time each day to accomplish all the things you hope to do?😳 Are you a bitcoiner with low-time preference?πŸ«‚

Here's a sonnet I've written about the promise of eternity.πŸ˜„

https://peakd.com/poetry/@creatr/time-s-undoing-a-sonnet

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Thanks, nostr:npub1ll99fcrclkvgff696u8tq9vupw9fulfc8fysdf6gfwp7hassrh2sktxszt πŸ™πŸ»πŸ˜„πŸ’œπŸ’–πŸ«‚πŸ˜†πŸ‘

I'm a fan of Christian and creation poetry. Other types, i find a bit too hollow and pretentious.

I find good poetry, even of unbelievers, revelatory of the human condition and sometimes very moving in a tragic way. It reminds me to pray for them.

In the "un" category, a few of my favorites are Paul Simon, Gordon Lightfoot, Cat Stevens, and Elton John...

Great poem! Hey in the preamble at the top you may want to change β€œloosing” to β€œlosing”.

Thanks for reading, and for the thoughtful edit!πŸ™πŸ»πŸ˜„πŸ’œπŸ’–πŸ«‚πŸ˜†πŸ‘

This particularly spoke to me today. I had a $900k+ contract bid to deliver today. I had my part of the package done weeks ago. But received others’ contributions to the package a mere two hours before the bid closed. I’m still in flight or fight. Wish I could take the rest of the day off. Fiat mines suck.

Ah, so glad you've drawn meaning from my work!πŸ«‚πŸ˜„

Friend nostr:npub127ekpmm3w2ttqfe9r4j3hhflx0uw89lw7457pyd9dc7zp03ld4dswn7dvk, I've prayed for you just now... While I'm no longer "in the workforce," decades of past experience inform me quite effectively about what you're feeling....πŸ€”πŸ˜―πŸ˜³

May Jesus/God bless you in the most effective way according to the needs you feel in this circumstance.πŸ™πŸ»πŸ’–πŸ‘