Great poem! Hey in the preamble at the top you may want to change βloosingβ to βlosingβ.
Have you ever felt frustrated by the tyranny of time?π€ Do you have enough time each day to accomplish all the things you hope to do?π³ Are you a bitcoiner with low-time preference?π«
Here's a sonnet I've written about the promise of eternity.π
https://peakd.com/poetry/@creatr/time-s-undoing-a-sonnet
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Thanks for reading, and for the thoughtful edit!ππ»ππππ«ππ