I am still enjoying this book very much. The only real critique I have is there are a few very minor grammar mistakes.

I know what the words are leading up to, but this is a surrealist book and I’m excited to consume some bizarre mindfuckery. You better not rug us Avi 😂

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Thank you 🙏. Yes, need to do a better job of proof reading before hitting send 😂

And the surrealism has barely begun. The main character IMO won’t show up till chapter 6 and that’s when the real shenanigans begin

Oh, so there’s about to be a turn of events 👀

Have you finished chapter 7 yet?

Not yet. Slow progress between fiat mining and family commitments 😂 good news is, I’m able to write a couple of pages a day at least

So the word based story arc is not cringe then? That’s what I was referring to earlier

No I like that part. I like how the real world is merging, and it’s a puzzle to solve.

I will say I hope the ending is more than Oliver finding a Bitcoin wallet and getting rich. It’s obvious that he’s finding a seed phrase, so I’m hoping for some deep philosophical craziness 🧐

The end isn’t going to be what you think it is 🤫

That’s what I thought ☺️

OH SHIT. Ok here we go. Lets see where you are taking us