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I am still enjoying this book very much. The only real critique I have is there are a few very minor grammar mistakes.

I know what the words are leading up to, but this is a surrealist book and I’m excited to consume some bizarre mindfuckery. You better not rug us Avi 😂
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Avi Burra 2y ago

Thank you 🙏. Yes, need to do a better job of proof reading before hitting send 😂

And the surrealism has barely begun. The main character IMO won’t show up till chapter 6 and that’s when the real shenanigans begin

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BTCapsule 🏴 2y ago

Oh, so there’s about to be a turn of events 👀

Have you finished chapter 7 yet?

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Avi Burra 2y ago

Not yet. Slow progress between fiat mining and family commitments 😂 good news is, I’m able to write a couple of pages a day at least