It conveys mixed emotions to me. Maybe "Digital Freedom" instead of "Freedom at risk" ...or something that matches the happiness of the intro?

Maybe consider some trimming on the forward. Dropping a few adjectives & breaking it into a couple sentences would make it a little easier to follow.

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A positive approach would be definitively better.

Keep in mind that the title rotate with different sentences, but all are still positive.

And yes, the text can be shortened.