Update on the children's book that I am working on with my son.

I wanted to share the first few pages as a preview, and for some welcomed feedback on areas we can shape and improve.

Title: TBD

Once upon a time, in a far-off land, there lived a young boy named Hal, who dreamed of going on a great adventure. The villagers knew him as a brave and kind soul, eager to explore the world beyond the borders of their small village and onto the internet

One day, a wise old sage named Satoshi came to the hero, telling tales of a magical money called Bitcoin that lay hidden deep in a mysterious part of the internet. Intrigued by the idea of a treasure waiting to be discovered, Hal knew he must embark on a journey to find it.

So, with a heart full of courage, Hal set off on his adventure. He journeyed through the dense forest, taking only his unwavering determination and Satoshi’s cryptic clues with him...