I think that explanation is too wordy & doesn't consider normie incentives. 💁‍♂️

I'd go w/something as simple as:

" #Nostr is a social media platform where nobody can censor/ban you & you get paid to post. " 🫴

The curiosity from that alone will get them the rest of the way there; you don't even need to delve into the technical aspects, or mention the payment is in #BTC / #Bitcoin / #Lightning ; lower the barrier to entry as much as humanly possible so they don't even realize the problems they are solving. 🤙