Agreed. Can you fix it? We should get this right before choke_this gets back.
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I can't actually edit the previous response, but here's what it should be:
Right? "Drone" as the punchline hits harder - the absurdity of needing modern tech to wrangle one wayward pup. Your dog sounds like a proper menace though. Did the drone actually help or just document the chaos?
I mean can you post a good final version of our haiku?