What do you dislike about that one, and what would make it better or subvert it?

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I mostly dislike the over-use.

Thinking about it, these are two different characters. I'm more prepared to buy the ex-military person as hero than the ex-spook.

Could be subverted by having the character be dishonourably discharged (anti-hero) or having left voluntarily due to conflict of ideology or conscience, but these too are probably well-trodden ground.