the bookworm in me is saying: am I reading the tame version of "Christian Grey"? 🀣 Are you going to write a romantic novel? Have you thought of it?

I commend the descriptive writing, it encourages visual and take you to the scene. It invites the readers to use their senses! πŸ‘ŒImpressive β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘πŸ’―

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im craving more

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you ladies are so kind~!

nostr:npub12u56mxg60cxt3zt3emfrfp6czptep4g3vzsfkgksmreeefmzmcgsuye0ve, i'll consider it. maybe something shorter, thoughβ€”this is something i've just started trying. thank you so much for the feedback~! ^__^

nostr:npub1n0pdxnwa4q7eg2slm5m2wjrln2hvwsxmyn48juedjr3c85va99yqc5pfp6, and thank you, too~! 😻😽

i have another short story that i posted awhile back, when i have a chance i'll post it as an article.

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tsk tsk tsk no pressure. we will wait LOL 🀣