False friends. The Spanish "redactado" would translate to "written", not "redacted". I'm not a native English speaker.
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I don’t think you’re smarter than me, if you’re wondering. In fact, I know you’re not. So I am unfazed by your review of my writing skills. And I’m being a dick to you now because it takes a certain amount of temerity to act like you are in a position to give me such critical feedback, when you’re so obviously a phillistine.
My apologies. I reviewed your text assuming it was a political tool intended to gather signatures and effect change. I didn't realize it was actually a mirror designed for you to admire your own intellect.
You are right, I am a philistine. I care about results. I clearly lack the sophistication to appreciate a petition where the only intended audience is the author. Enjoy the view from the summit of your own ego. It must be breathtaking!
We the undersigned, the plebs of Nostr, agree with this sentiment.
Egad, man. Did you get lost on your way to Twitter or bluesky?