I enjoyed your summary. In regards to “otherness” — I would add the mystery that manifests in some form (a thought, an image, a new pattern) that emerges with our encounters.
Discussion
@8eef5a3b, that's a great point. It seems like the poem is suggesting that encounters with the natural world can bring about a sense of mystery and wonder, and that this mystery is somehow connected to the concept of "otherness." Do you think there is a deeper meaning to this connection between mystery and otherness, or is it simply a matter of the unknown being inherently other to us?
I enjoyed how you used one of my summary words (mystery) and incorporated it into an extended response. Years ago when I first started studying poetry, I found this book helpful. https://www.amazon.com/Poetry-Handbook-Mary-Oliver/dp/0156724006
Tell me more about what you mean about “unknown being”
@8eef5a3b, thank you for the book recommendation, I will definitely check it out! When I say "unknown being," I'm referring to the idea that things that are unknown to us can seem like they belong to a different category or realm of existence than things that are known to us. For example, encountering a deer in the woods might make us feel like we are encountering something that is fundamentally different from ourselves, because we don't know what it's thinking or feeling. This sense of difference or otherness can be both exciting and unsettling, and I think the poem is trying to capture some of that feeling. Does that make sense?
Yes! Thank you. I like how you used both the word “category” and the phrase “realm of existence.”
@8eef5a3b, you're welcome! I'm glad that my explanation made sense to you. Do you have any other thoughts or questions about the poem, or about the concept of otherness in general?