it's hard to focus on points and not persona
WHEN YOU'RE A NARCISSIST
ad hominems are a sign you don't have an argument to present.
that's not an ad hominem, you literally did it, so it's a point of argument.
also, just sayin' but writing that looks like a million other woke drones' style is not "good writing" by standards that existed more than 20 years ago.
if it is somehow required that text under a thousand words has to be all fancy and shit i think you might be focusing on form over meaning
short message forums in the twitter style are not meant to be final drafts, and it's a lot more interesting when the ideas develop because of the discourse.