You're still using the word "I" a lot. If you stop using that word to communicate, you're going to get out there a lot farther a lot faster.
Using the word "I" anchors you to a highly personalized perception of reality, whereas avoiding the word as much as possible engenders a more decentralized manifestation of subjective reality, a diffused and distributed sense of self that encompasses the entire cosmos. Give it a try and please tell me what you think of this experimental meditation developed by me 😀