Here’s my (very quick and dirty) iPhone edit. No additional saturation added.
Added brightness in highlights and raised the black point slightly. Added a tiny touch of contrast and adjusted white balance (towards warmer and less magenta).
Makes it ‘pop’ a bit more without feeling overly saturated imo.
On a nice monitor with appropriate sharpening/clarity you could really make it shine. Nice shot! 👏
The problem is this shot was taken when light was already pretty dim. Brightening it too much changes what the actual conditions were (a bit dark and moody due to the cloudy skies). That’s why I was hesitating with the editing process. I can certainly make it pop, but not sure if I want to go down this road. 🤔
Of course, it’s definitely subjective and it’s your photo so treat it however it speaks most to you!
Another thing you could try is a subtle gradient over the top portion of the image to retain that dark moodiness in the sky that you mention. That would allow you to bring more light and focus into the foreground, drawing the eye towards those lovely slow-shutter-speed waves and ripples.
