Organic farmers aren't scamming anyone, it's pesticide producers and intensive farmers that knowingly and unknowingly destroy the value of organic farmers hard work, as well as people's health, fertility and the natural world in general

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Does my post come off as laying blame on the farmers?

No, not at all. It's just those first few words ("organic wine is a scam") that, in my opinion at least, push readers into an entirely unhelpful frame to think about this problem (organic vs non-organic). You nuance it a lot later on but half the readers only read the headline

So what should my hook have been to get people's attention?

Perhaps "wine is a scam" would have got your followers attention 😅?

you're right. wanna start writing posts for me?