Subnostr

Just received some withering feedback on the first six chapters of 24 from my developmental editor. Most of it makes sense in retrospect. The second draft is going to need some heavy rework 😩

BTCapsule 🏴 2y ago

I hope you don’t change the characters too much, but I’m interested to see how this plays out

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Avi Burra 2y ago

I’m not planning on changing the characters or plot at all. Right now the feedback has been around dialogue structure and phasing out how information is dropped, especially when it’s large amounts in one go