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Haiku, anyone?🙏😁😆💜

The Joy of Surfing

~A Haiku~

by Duncan Cary Palmer

It's been a rough day.

Catching a few waves heals me.

Thanks, LORD, for the rest!

https://peakd.com/poetry/@creatr/the-joy-of-surfing-a-haiku-by-duncan-cary-palmer

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Pater Nostr 2y ago

I once read this haiku by a Japanese author, it is very beautiful, it talks about the subjective that is the perception of reality.

"Dew drops

are dew drops

However

However"

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Duncan Cary Palmer 2y ago

AFAIK, that doesn't quite fit the standard haiku pattern...

Nonetheless, it's quite lovely and thought provoking...🙏😁💜

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Martialis 2y ago

It's most likely a literal translation rather than one which seeks to conform to English-language conventions.

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Duncan Cary Palmer 2y ago

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