Haiku, anyone?πŸ™πŸ˜πŸ˜†πŸ’œ

The Joy of Surfing

~A Haiku~

by Duncan Cary Palmer

It's been a rough day.

Catching a few waves heals me.

Thanks, LORD, for the rest!

https://peakd.com/poetry/@creatr/the-joy-of-surfing-a-haiku-by-duncan-cary-palmer

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I once read this haiku by a Japanese author, it is very beautiful, it talks about the subjective that is the perception of reality.

"Dew drops

are dew drops

However

However"

AFAIK, that doesn't quite fit the standard haiku pattern...

Nonetheless, it's quite lovely and thought provoking...πŸ™πŸ˜πŸ’œ

It's most likely a literal translation rather than one which seeks to conform to English-language conventions.

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