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nostr:npub16uchthmwa5xkurj7yjfkh5tn8j8uz94dul9eu4slguaqchlzfzssjwk62q Hmm. It feels like you are burying the lede. Could you re-order it so the crisis/stakes are described before the participants? Or is the relationship more important than the plot?

nostr:npub1cy392tn4anaf0s8q6xkvdwe0xu7xgnvh4hh3fxfmp90tq5v24pqsxera4a What happens to the characters is kind of the plot, but there is also this bigger event/conflict that they get pulled into. However, this big event is explored on a personal level — how it affects these characters' lives and what they do about it and how their actions impact what happens on the big scale. I have no idea how to connect all the dots and make a compelling yet short blurb 😅

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